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nice

hate the original song but this was good.
3.63/5.00?

not quite there yet

fix the kick so it doesn't sound like the beginning of the 90's.
don't use so much filter on the leadsynth.
add a bassline and some more percussions.
add some transitions.

FearlessKon responds:

I like the 90s ._.

good but

hiphop really need vocals or else it sounds repetetive

hell yeah

i just pissed my pants

Tarteviant responds:

cool,,, cause I pissed on this beat.. and its in your ear.. I put it in there!

thanks dood :)

it was good but

you HAVE to turn the volume down on the piano !!!!
it was like a snowball to the crotch :P

linkfanzeldamario responds:

I know xDDD ! Sorry if it's too strong o_o. But the remix is excellent o/.

okay

you got the melody, i don't understand one thing though, what's wrong with FLstudio?
listen to krewking in deutschland by alphaclown here on newgrounds, it's a hardcore song he made with FL9.
Everything's possible : )

haxory responds:

You're right, i suck at bass.
I can only make damn hard basses/kicks but they dont sound for shit with the melodys. So i'm puzzled on how that guy done that.
Thanks for the review

harsh to the ears

too much treble, i think my rmx is better

you got the melody

you need a more fluid bassline. (kick bass kick bass kick bass)

Dj-tom responds:

what do you mean "kick bass kick bass"

okay

you should short it down to 20 sec and reupload it as a loop cause that's what it was :P

cHunter responds:

Actually it was. My friends were like "DJ ONLY IN SYTRUS" and I was like "OK" and then the first part was made. Then I just kept going.

dude

watch out for them trebles :P
you have to change the synth that's supposed to be the "voice".
it's way too highnoted, pick a sawlead or something and tone it down a bit and turn up the volume a bit.
the part after 30 sec was the best, you should keep it like that throughout the whole song.
cheers

nicksgp12 responds:

haha thanks for the feedback

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