Charmanzer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tetris Jumpstyle RemiX]

wtf?

you ripped the tetris theme and added a weak kick?
this isn't even jumpstyle.
The kick shouldn't be disted and don't use tranceleads.

[Brando ft Scoop - Road 2 Dance]

cool

the intro is kinda boring and after a while the song gets repetetive but that doesn't have to be negative, this is the kinda song that would go well on a dancefloor (extend it a few minutes).
Overall it's a good song but needs some variation.

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Yeah very true, needs variation. I'm guessing this song didn't come out too well with all my hardstyle/ nustyle audience lol. It's a big change for me to be making this stuff. But don't think I've stopped making hardstyle, I still have a few still in WiP and I really hope to work on them. REALLY!

Thanks for the info.

-Cheers Brando

[Dj Walom - Pirate]

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you should call the song "when johnny comes marching home" since that's the real title of the tune you used.

[Guitar vs Piano (8bit)]

actually

this was really awful.
The intro sucks and is too long or at least you should add something more to it.
The drums were really crappy, when they came in they made me think of anything but 8-bit, and i understand you didn't have any percussion that sounded like 8bit, download refx quadrasid and you're all set.
And some parts of the song sounds like "fear of the dark".
AND WHERE THE HELL IS THE GUITAR OR THE PIANO?!

pheel responds:

Your review has confussed me.

You have acknowledged that I have no 8bit percussion meaning you have read SOME of the song description but you have failed to realise this is a cover.

Perhaps if you had listened to Goukisan's before hand you would have realised where the hell the Guitar and Piano are.

Try reading the author comments in the future ;D

[Mortal Kombat Instrumental]

-...

do something original instead of copying a midi

[We Came To Finish You!]

mega man :D

this could easily be in a megaman game !!!
god damn it this was good..

midimachine responds:

Why thank you :)

[i like to move it terry-REMIX]

it's wrong

the notes are wrong :P i like the beats though

[Crying Dance {Trance}]

great

cool song, like the melodies alot! the kick is too thin though but that's my own opinion :P the ending part is the best :) 1.50 til the end.

keep it up

[DJ Sumara - Fantasy]

cool

the intro is far to long though, since the song only is 3 minutes and the intro is over 1 minute long

[The Rise of Evil]

here goes

an island in the carribean the year 1756 where a pirateship quietly entering the shore to plunder the village.
that's what my mind came up with :D
one thing though, the drums that came about 1.30 and the drums at the end, take them away :P the other percussion were cool though.

This is a poor site to get peoples opinion cause there are always some dumb turds that constantly bombs great songs with zeroes just to raise their own songs :P ive stopped uploading my "good songs" or even finished.

Overall, good work except for the drums :) i wish you all the luck!

sadlersongs responds:

Thanks! I was also wondering about those beats thinking they may be too abrupt. I put them in there just to change it up a little, so maybe I'll experiment a little more there.

I guess I want the opinion of the people here because most of them are the average Joe when it comes to music. If I were to ask some fellow colleagues or some professors or other classical composers I think the piece would become way too complicated if I followed their advice.

Thanks for listening!